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Carolyn Bishop's avatar

Oh, to love the fragrance of sentences! The vivid accuracy of Denis Johnson’s thimble.

Your idea that a great sentence “shakes loose our empathy,” is so spot on. Also that a story can go ahead and be a peacock for a moment with sentences that are vibrant and shimmery, and then drop back to the ground where the dirt and lost coins are. Thanks for another rich and lively post, DL!

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David Long's avatar

Bless your heart! Good to hear from you, CB!

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mary g.'s avatar

Great post! So many examples! Thank you, David.

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